Post by Froggy on Jul 12, 2006 19:44:02 GMT -5
The beginning of the story is here:
www.youngwriters.proboards14.com/index.cgi?board=joint&action=display&thread=1140998789&page=1
What's going on in a nutshell:
It started out around the time of the council. The main characters are the fellowship, Ella (Elrond's adopted daughter), Bockle (a little gnome), Marina (another elf, possibly another adopted daughter of Elrond?), Pcura (a human who wants Ella dead), Ashlyn (another elf) and Jaryrr (an elf with a despise for humans since they tortured him horribly).
Ella snuck into the council and learned about the ring. She wanted to help get rid of it, but she knew Elrond wouldn't let her. Later that day she climbed a tree and waited for the others. While she was in the tree, a band of uruk-hai spotted her. One climbed up at the same time Marina did. Ella stomped on the uruk's hand and he fell to the ground, vowing to get revenge.
A little earlier, a small gnome named Bockle's house had been attacked and pillaged by these same Uruk-Hai. They had stolen his treasures, and he (also) vowed to get revenge. He followed them, and came across Ella, and the two of them became friends.
In an effort to pay Ella back for stomping on his hand, the head Uruk attacked Rivendell. There was a very long battle scene in which Marina and Jaryrr realized they were falling in love and to make a long story short, the elves won and the Uruks retreated. Then the fellowship began on their journey, with Ella, Marina, and Jaryrr following close behind, and Pcura and Bockle (for different reasons) following Ella. Someone in the fellowship let them know that they knew they were being followed, so everyone showed themselves and became part of the fellowship.
The head Uruk came back and was about to attack Ella when Bockle rescued her and in the process killed both himself and the Uruk. And we learned about Pcura's terrible childhood a little, so now we know why she's such a mean human and a little (but not really) of why she wants to kill Ella.
They went through the Mines of Moria and lost Gandalf, then traveled to Lothlorien. Safe because of the protection of the elves, Ella told them about her vengeful aunt. Ashlyn met Haldir, and Ella revealed her love for Legolas. As they were leaving Lothlorien, Ella's aunt threatened to kill her or trade her life for Leggy's. Leggy consented, and during the swap the fellowship turned on her and killed Aunt Jezka. Now they are just getting out of their boats.
Other potentially important information:
Marina and Jaryrr are in love.
Ella and Legolas are in love.
Ashlyn and Haldir will be in love.
(do I sense a common thread, here?
)
Most recent posts:
"c'mon pippen!" called marina, "help us." they had reached shore and were pushing the boats up into the sandy bank.
"in a moment…" he mumbled, sitting down, "i feel very…" his face went entirely green and he ran into the bushes. marina winced.
"maybe a boat with ppl huggin was nt such a great idea…" she mumbled to jayrr, who chuckled, wading into the water beside her to help her push the boat ashore.
Ella helped them haul the boats onto the shore and gather their supplies.
Ashlyn's and Haldir's boat came up last, as they pulled it in and unloaded it. Annoyance was wafting off of Ashlyn in waves. But it was cleverly hidden so only her closest friends could detect it. Namely, Jaryrr (who knew the best), Marina, Ella and Leggy. You could also tell by looking at her face. Haldir had seen her expression, and knew he was at the wrong end of the problem. But he did nothing to acknoweage (Okay, I KNOW I didn't spell that right. I have no clue how to spell it.) it nor fix it. Which made Ashlyn even more annoyed.
Now the rest of y'all keep it going!
www.youngwriters.proboards14.com/index.cgi?board=joint&action=display&thread=1140998789&page=1
What's going on in a nutshell:
It started out around the time of the council. The main characters are the fellowship, Ella (Elrond's adopted daughter), Bockle (a little gnome), Marina (another elf, possibly another adopted daughter of Elrond?), Pcura (a human who wants Ella dead), Ashlyn (another elf) and Jaryrr (an elf with a despise for humans since they tortured him horribly).
Ella snuck into the council and learned about the ring. She wanted to help get rid of it, but she knew Elrond wouldn't let her. Later that day she climbed a tree and waited for the others. While she was in the tree, a band of uruk-hai spotted her. One climbed up at the same time Marina did. Ella stomped on the uruk's hand and he fell to the ground, vowing to get revenge.
A little earlier, a small gnome named Bockle's house had been attacked and pillaged by these same Uruk-Hai. They had stolen his treasures, and he (also) vowed to get revenge. He followed them, and came across Ella, and the two of them became friends.
In an effort to pay Ella back for stomping on his hand, the head Uruk attacked Rivendell. There was a very long battle scene in which Marina and Jaryrr realized they were falling in love and to make a long story short, the elves won and the Uruks retreated. Then the fellowship began on their journey, with Ella, Marina, and Jaryrr following close behind, and Pcura and Bockle (for different reasons) following Ella. Someone in the fellowship let them know that they knew they were being followed, so everyone showed themselves and became part of the fellowship.
The head Uruk came back and was about to attack Ella when Bockle rescued her and in the process killed both himself and the Uruk. And we learned about Pcura's terrible childhood a little, so now we know why she's such a mean human and a little (but not really) of why she wants to kill Ella.
They went through the Mines of Moria and lost Gandalf, then traveled to Lothlorien. Safe because of the protection of the elves, Ella told them about her vengeful aunt. Ashlyn met Haldir, and Ella revealed her love for Legolas. As they were leaving Lothlorien, Ella's aunt threatened to kill her or trade her life for Leggy's. Leggy consented, and during the swap the fellowship turned on her and killed Aunt Jezka. Now they are just getting out of their boats.
Other potentially important information:
Marina and Jaryrr are in love.
Ella and Legolas are in love.
Ashlyn and Haldir will be in love.
(do I sense a common thread, here?
)Most recent posts:
"c'mon pippen!" called marina, "help us." they had reached shore and were pushing the boats up into the sandy bank.
"in a moment…" he mumbled, sitting down, "i feel very…" his face went entirely green and he ran into the bushes. marina winced.
"maybe a boat with ppl huggin was nt such a great idea…" she mumbled to jayrr, who chuckled, wading into the water beside her to help her push the boat ashore.
Ella helped them haul the boats onto the shore and gather their supplies.
Ashlyn's and Haldir's boat came up last, as they pulled it in and unloaded it. Annoyance was wafting off of Ashlyn in waves. But it was cleverly hidden so only her closest friends could detect it. Namely, Jaryrr (who knew the best), Marina, Ella and Leggy. You could also tell by looking at her face. Haldir had seen her expression, and knew he was at the wrong end of the problem. But he did nothing to acknoweage (Okay, I KNOW I didn't spell that right. I have no clue how to spell it.) it nor fix it. Which made Ashlyn even more annoyed.
Now the rest of y'all keep it going!
)
--Den)
