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Post by Jayda on Apr 10, 2007 22:03:52 GMT -5
(What kinda new threat? And I like to think we're friends, Ethan, yes. But I originally opened his/her story to move it, because it was in the wrong board. But I saw something that caught my eye...I'm sorry. I'll look over yours when I get a chance if you like. But I don't know a lot about grammar, most of my suggestions are opinion-based.)
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Post by Ethan on Apr 10, 2007 22:10:12 GMT -5
(good...i want an oppinion bases...i hate getting grammar and spelling tips...it pisses me off...grammar and spelling would obviously be fixed before it could ever be published [which is something i'd love to do...]..and I really dont know yet...I JUST thought of the idea like five seconds after eading your post second last post)
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Post by Brokenhearts on Apr 11, 2007 5:16:43 GMT -5
(cud we make them all go 2 europe?! that wud b quite interesting ;D)
Fance? Italy? oh how'd she'd love to see those places again. it had been so long! she wandered how they'd changed... evolved. she heard things about them on the human news as such, but she wanted to go there again. it would help keep her memories of sasha alive… keep james and his pack out of her hair. she'd miss vic, lucy and rob… but they knew she was going and she'd contact them as soon as she was settled. and raoul, she'd miss him too. yet this was freedom, chance to live life the way she wanted to! without ppl telling her wat to do.
"Italy," she murmered, "I'd love to go to italy." the far away look in her eyes fled as she looked at the wolvs around her. "come with me," she stated suddenly. they look startled. "i'm serious! come with me! this fighting is pointless! and helping me... helping me here would make u seem like some kinda of abandoner or something. i no u have informats and sh!t, but they'd nver believe i'm 1! so… come with me… to italy…" she looked round at all of them, awaiting their answer.
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Post by Ethan on Apr 11, 2007 5:34:34 GMT -5
Was she serious?! She really wanted them to abandone their pack, and flee with her. Thye had former commitments to their pack. No pretty, stubborn vampire could change that...right?
"Yes," Ryan said bluntly, but it was an accident. The yes just shot out.
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Post by Brokenhearts on Apr 11, 2007 5:55:05 GMT -5
"you will!" Rana couldn't stop the grin forming on her face, as much as she and Fox had a history of argueing, she found herself liking the gruff werewolf- almost as much as she had come to like Kit. Almost. Not quite. she also knew she sounded rediculous saying that. but she didn't particularly care. "wat about you two?" she added, looking at Silver and Kit, her heart hammering in her chest.
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Post by Ethan on Apr 11, 2007 6:02:00 GMT -5
Ryan regretted the word the second he said it. Why did he say it? Ryan had convinced himself it was an accident, and it just came out, but he didn't wasnt to take it back.
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Post by Jayda on Apr 11, 2007 16:44:39 GMT -5
(Care to give us a little more details on your idea, Ethan? Or are you going to surprise us?)
Kit's jaw literally dropped. "Leave?" he said in disbelief. "Leave New York? Leave the country? Leave...the fighting? Oh, but the pack...They need us..."
He was trying to convince himself of something, but he wasn't sure for which argument. Leaving...odd word, he thought. Never been out of New York before.
"But what would we do?" he asked weakly, a brutal headache forming behind his eyes. "Are we allowed to just leave?" he added in a tiny voice. It was strange how something so unfamiliar could reduce him to acting like a confused child.
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Post by Brokenhearts on Apr 11, 2007 17:06:07 GMT -5
"have u never left New York?" asked Rana, somewhat surprised, and severely confused, his face answered that. she smiled, and reached out a hand to touch his arm, "it's amazing," she told him, "theres so much to see! so many to meet... it's..." she took a deep breath and closed her eyes allowing the memories to wash over her. "come on kit," she urged, "come with me… and Ryan if hes still willing to come. see the rest of the world! its so much... cleaner and prettier than the streets of new york..."
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Post by Ethan on Apr 11, 2007 17:56:30 GMT -5
She was making to sound like something it wasn't, an adventure between friends. "On second thought," Ryan said, although he did want to go, but he thought it was for the wrong reasons, "it may be best if only you go, Rana. We still don't know if we trust you, and, to be honest," he lied, "I don't want to go. The word 'yes' slipped."
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Post by Brokenhearts on Apr 11, 2007 18:17:39 GMT -5
Rana's smile slipped a bit but nodded. "it's up to you- bt its ur loss. im nt sayin stick 2gtha wen we get there," she chuckled, "hw long wud tht last b4 1 of u kill me." she grinned sadly. "bt like i said up to you…" she looked at the other two, "but wat about u? we cnt hang about here 4 evr... and i'll need ur help 2 gt thru the the airport..."
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Post by Ethan on Apr 11, 2007 18:20:24 GMT -5
Ryan sighed, and waited for JJ to post (( )).
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Post by Jayda on Apr 12, 2007 15:02:15 GMT -5
Kit ran a hand through his hair. "It'd be nice to get out of here," he admitted. "But the pack..."
He just wanted to be reassured that they'd be okay, that was all. There were a lot of young ones, wolves who hadn't been turned for very long. It was a lot to handle for the elder ones. "I think we should go," he said after a minute. "I'll go. Silver?" He turned to her. "What about you?"
He looked at Ryan as well. "You have to be certain, because after we're gone, they're never going to let another escape. Think about it for a minute. You like to kill, I know. But this is something good we can do for a change. It's worth a shot." He shrugged. "Maybe they're be vamps waiting there with weapons made of the purest silver available. We don't know. That's life's adventure. Are you positive you don't want to go?"
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Post by Ethan on Apr 12, 2007 15:56:52 GMT -5
(Em, hurry and post)
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Post by Emily on Apr 12, 2007 16:01:22 GMT -5
Silver got pounced on by a gang of bloodthirsty vampires who wanted to kill her. And she died.
*sighs* Ok she's dead... Happy?
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Post by Jayda on Apr 12, 2007 16:03:25 GMT -5
(WHY do you and Ethan insist on doing that?)
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