Post by johnsapphire on Oct 13, 2006 18:07:45 GMT -5
The poem, I am sure, had tremendous emotion behind it. Unfortunately, Cy, in your haste to express your emotions, you wrote it in such an abstract form that ONLY YOU could understand the subtleties you put in there, and are ENTIRELY INVISIBLE to the rest of the world. The poem itself seemed brief, rushed. I don't care for it at all.
John! Im going to have to tickle you if you dont cooperate.
I know its hard for you and all, but if someone were to say the same thing about "The Way" wouldnt you be liable to defend it? Please try... for me? *puppy eyes*
Post by johnsapphire on Oct 13, 2006 23:30:02 GMT -5
You know, I am very ticklish. Ah, Cy...your poem was...whether clearly or its antithesis...inspired by...emotion that...was...present...in some form or another
Post by Cy Skywalker on Oct 14, 2006 14:13:13 GMT -5
johnsapphire said:
Ah, Cy...your poem was...whether clearly or its antithesis...inspired by...emotion that...was...present...in some form or another
*lets out a great breath*
Snrk.
But whyever couldn't I turn it around? You said it's too vague. Ok. So I can make it less vague.
You two, (John and Eeky), are very unique characters...you play off of each other. Two powerfully opposite personalities somehow getting along. Good material.
Last Edit: Oct 14, 2006 14:14:32 GMT -5 by Cy Skywalker
I admit, that it is your opinion on what you like or dont like about the poem. And you are entitled wholey to say what you want. Please try to take others feelings into account. Even if its as trivial as... I dont like your poem at all, but I hope you may be able to improve upon it. Thats enough. Please John, please?