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my first nonscifi Sept 25, 2006 20:02:10 GMT -5

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Post by SciFiGuy88 on Sept 25, 2006 20:02:10 GMT -5

Hey everyone,

I'm looking for help on developing ideas for my first drama story. I want it to be a Christian drama based loosely on some true events that have occurred in my church that ive experienced as a youth minister. the setting is in the neighborhood, in the church, etc.

however, i want some more than just talk. but that's the problem, i dont know how to incorporate thriller elements, action scenes, etc into it.

any help would be great, thanks

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my first nonscifi Sept 25, 2006 20:05:41 GMT -5

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Post by Angie on Sept 25, 2006 20:05:41 GMT -5

Perhaps you could write a short summary and do a couple of scenes for us to help you with?

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"Mr. Madison, what you?ve just said is one of the most insanely idiotic things I have ever heard. At no point in your rambling, incoherent response were you even close to anything that could be considered a rational thought. Everyone in this room is now dumber for having listened to it. I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul." "Okay, a simple 'fail' would?ve done just fine."

"You are just a paranoid troll with a fuse the length of a mouse?s wang. You may continue to troll, but know that I retain the justified right to turn off my hearing in your direction any moment, and I believe that others have that right as well."

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"Kareniet learned how a child knows not of dangers of vacuuming and cried, 'Thou craven folly-fallen flap-dragon!'"

"The military would not let her talk either, what with spawning Seth the Weapon of Mass Defecation."

"Never let a problem to be solved become more important than a person to be loved."

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SciFiGuy88 Semi-Mighty Mod Sax-A-Phone....gotta love jazz music Posts: 109	my first nonscifi Sept 25, 2006 20:15:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SciFiGuy88 on Sept 25, 2006 20:15:51 GMT -5 yea maybe, i have no classes tomorrow so ill probably post something up
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my first nonscifi Sept 27, 2006 16:04:26 GMT -5

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Post by Cy Skywalker on Sept 27, 2006 16:04:26 GMT -5

Read stuff that is like what you want. Frank Peretti maybe, though his always has a SF edge to it. Unfortunately I can't recommend any non SF books off the top of my head.

Any particular reason you're going out of genre?

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