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Post by Emily on Sept 22, 2006 16:36:45 GMT -5
Yeah I started writing this in my biology lesson, because I got tired of reading 'exciting and interesting' stuff on Cells etc.
It's literally a REALLY short paragraph, and KUDOS! to whichever wonderful person who created this board! Mes saviour!
I don't even know who the main characters are in this book... except that it would follow some sort of feel that A young teenager (male/female) can see spirits that they don't want to see....
Anyway, read on, and please comment/help me!
(P.s. Please other fellow mods, don't move this to Writers Workshop, only because I thought it fit best in this category!)
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You can always tell when someone is watching you, like a cold trickle of icy water, flowing down your spine. It feels slightly unnerving, but gives you a deceptive pull to turn around and face the perpatrator.
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Yeah.. that's it!
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Oct 1, 2006 23:26:00 GMT -5
i like it ;D it feels like the start to those epic 'prophecy' stories, or maybe even the new way of writing vampire stories- but with much more class and depth. it's really a gripping beginning ;D
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Post by The Observer on Oct 10, 2006 21:11:33 GMT -5
Sounds great, I'm ready for the story to begin!
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Post by randommonkey on Dec 6, 2007 8:46:51 GMT -5
Maybe It could be a vampire stalking her or something. I really like that paragraph though.
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