Post by randommonkey on Dec 2, 2007 21:07:55 GMT -5
OK, everyone this is very short snippet. So get over it, ( sorry, sometimes I'm a bit rude). Anyway I would really, really appreciate some critisism... be nice ( please) I'm a newbie.
"Lily, Lily, Lily," She heard. The soft footsteps at the end of her bed.
"Who are you?" she wanted to say, but instead she cowered deeper into her covers. Lily was an orphan, going to home after home in search of a family. Every time she said that she saw someone. The shrinks said that she had made a friend in her mind that would never leave her. A way for her to cope with not having parents. They were wrong, she had made a nightmare that stalked her in the shadows, waiting, just waiting for the perfect time to have it's revenge.
"Lily, Lily, Lily," She heard. The soft footsteps at the end of her bed.
"Who are you?" she wanted to say, but instead she cowered deeper into her covers. Lily was an orphan, going to home after home in search of a family. Every time she said that she saw someone. The shrinks said that she had made a friend in her mind that would never leave her. A way for her to cope with not having parents. They were wrong, she had made a nightmare that stalked her in the shadows, waiting, just waiting for the perfect time to have it's revenge.
