Post by Haley on Apr 12, 2008 14:26:46 GMT -5
The open door
and windy path
stretching down a leafless wood
Bare and cold.
Footsteps in
the howling silence
broken by the crow’s cry
mourning the lost.
Walk along with me
through the leafless wood
along the path.
Hear the crow’s cry
for the lost dreams
And be not afraid
Be not afraid.
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Critique would definitely be appreciated...I'm not sure exactly how it works, but I'd love any comments
and windy path
stretching down a leafless wood
Bare and cold.
Footsteps in
the howling silence
broken by the crow’s cry
mourning the lost.
Walk along with me
through the leafless wood
along the path.
Hear the crow’s cry
for the lost dreams
And be not afraid
Be not afraid.
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Critique would definitely be appreciated...I'm not sure exactly how it works, but I'd love any comments
