Post by cutieilydylan on Sept 16, 2008 4:58:48 GMT -5
plz comment whether its goo or not, really want to know whether its anything like i poem should be!!! 
These Feelings
These feelings that I'm feeling now
As you are holding my hand
They're some feelings other people
Just can't understand
You are my everything
And these feelings are all for you
I can't help but love you so much
And love everything you do
I love you more than anything
Because you are the boy of my dreams
In movies and books love is fun
And I'm seeing love is what it seems
I will love you forever and always
And we shall never part
Wherever we go
You'll always have a piece of my heart
Some people claim we won't last
But I don't believe what they say
Because I've learned from the start with you
These feelings don't just go away
plz comment whether its goo or not, really want to know whether its anything like i poem should be!!!
These Feelings
These feelings that I'm feeling now
As you are holding my hand
They're some feelings other people
Just can't understand
You are my everything
And these feelings are all for you
I can't help but love you so much
And love everything you do
I love you more than anything
Because you are the boy of my dreams
In movies and books love is fun
And I'm seeing love is what it seems
I will love you forever and always
And we shall never part
Wherever we go
You'll always have a piece of my heart
Some people claim we won't last
But I don't believe what they say
Because I've learned from the start with you
These feelings don't just go away
plz comment whether its goo or not, really want to know whether its anything like i poem should be!!!