Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jul 12, 2006 16:50:07 GMT -5
Internal Tears
They say things To get a reaction They never see the tears They’ll never get that satisfaction
She walks away Head held up high Not a glance their way Eyes fixed on the sky
Inside her body Her heart breaks Internal tears flood her soul Leave her be for fuck’s sakes
Having them see her hurt Is something that cannot be She has too much pride She well never let them see
Bitch, whore, slut, hoe These lies follow her step Haunting her life But she keeps her jaw set
Inside her body Her heart breaks Internal tears flood her soul Leave her be for fuck’s sakes
He tries to talk to her After their classes It is all his fault He started all the farces
Her broken eyes bore into his Trying to make him see He has hurt her That he holds the key
Inside her body Her heart breaks Internal tears flood her soul Leave her be for fuck’s sakes
He’ll never understand He is much too blind Her hope is wasted She’s much to kind
They kiss they hug They say I love you She wants it to happen She wants to start a new
How to trust the man Who betreyd her at every turn? Though she holds him close She knows she has much to learn
Inside her body Her heart breaks Internal tears flood her soul Leave her be for fuck’s sakes
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Post by Jayda on Jul 12, 2006 18:19:17 GMT -5
Wowzers, that's a pretty poem! Few of the rhymes could use a bit of work, but very nice work, Broky!
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jul 12, 2006 18:23:48 GMT -5
hee hee… rhyemein aint usually mi thing bt am pretty pleased with tht ;D am gonna work on it, i;ve already editd coastly feelings ;D
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Post by Emily on Jul 13, 2006 10:45:51 GMT -5
Awww it's beautiful Broky! Very beautiful, and I love the chorusy bit.
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jul 13, 2006 12:03:27 GMT -5
hee hee… thank u still needs a load of work tho
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