Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jul 12, 2006 16:55:36 GMT -5
Memories
They’re painful Hurtful Uncaring And mean They remind us Of how We used to be
They’re kind Helpful Loving And useful They remind us Of how We used to be
They’re stories Facts History And legend They remind us Of how It used to be
They’re interesting Informative Non-fiction And fiction They remind us Of how It used to be
They’re a legacy Another world A porhole And another life They tell us Of what It was like
They’re vivd Realistic Surealist And unjust They remind us Of what It was like
No matter what it was They are all the same A past you A past belief A past passion A past hate
But Most of all A past Life
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Post by Donald Duck on Jul 30, 2006 22:26:50 GMT -5
very good!
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Erik
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Post by Erik on Aug 1, 2006 17:41:17 GMT -5
I like it- wish I'd thought of an idea like that! ;D The contrast in the first two stanzas was particularly interesting and I found it intriguing that they both ended with 'they remind us of how we used to be'
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