Jakazul
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To the ends of the earth.
Posts: 43
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Post by Jakazul on Jul 13, 2006 13:02:11 GMT -5
Wrote it last night, all comments appreciated!
Prototype
You never told me that love is what hurts the most. You never gave me a chance, Just shot me down with those flying feelings. You suffocate me with new freedoms, So this is what it sounds likes, To hear your best friend's heart stop beating.
What's wrong with you to make everything right? Why would you think my wings would want to fly? What's wrong with you to make things this way? Did you really think that perfect would be okay?
I thought I warned you. I thought I taught you better than this.
So I guess every outting was leading up to this? Months sniffing your prey out, Building a friendship just to break it down. I miss the good times now, When everything was not as good, And I didn't feel like we were about to drown.
Copyright Jake Fox 2006, All Rights Reserved
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Post by Donald Duck on Jul 31, 2006 18:38:29 GMT -5
sad but i like it!
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Aug 8, 2006 7:22:55 GMT -5
Typical, but some words are very evocative.
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