Jakazul
Rank 0 (Total Newbie)
To the ends of the earth.
Posts: 43
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Post by Jakazul on Jul 15, 2006 18:32:13 GMT -5
Responses appreciated.
Letters from the Grave
I'll write you these letters from the grave, Telling you the things you should have saved, Telling you what's important in the end.
Old friendships, And all the sunny days. Not paychecks, Or what the doctor says.
These should be with you in the end.
Good memories, Of times that now have passed, The physical, Things will never last.
And you'll be left there without a friend.
True love and, Poetry so fine. Will keep you, Through the end of time.
And prayers you whisper in the night.
Your heartaches, Will come and go like rain, This world can, Be the end of pain.
But only if you set things right.
I'll write you these letters from the tomb, Praying that they'll reach you in the womb, It's all that matters in the end.
Fresh air and laughter and love, Rain drops and sun and things from above, Having someone to hold you close. Peaceful times that never could last, Happiness that was always too fast, The people you were never willing to lose.
I'll write you these letters from the grave. I'll write you what it's like to be alive.
Copyright Jake Fox 2006, All Rights Reserved
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Brokenhearts
Rank 15 (On Angie's Level)
Beware, all ye who talk 2 me
Posts: 4,934
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jul 15, 2006 18:55:40 GMT -5
wow… its got ur distictive… style as always (u cn always tell its u hu rote it ) but its so different 2 wat u usually rite @ the same time. it beautiful jake
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Post by Donald Duck on Jul 31, 2006 21:18:01 GMT -5
very nice!
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