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Post by skittlestiger on Jul 16, 2006 13:05:38 GMT -5
everyone who reviewed said they loved color me silver, so I figured I should post it on the new YWG, enjoy!!
One day
I saw life
In a child
He stared at me sweetly
Beautiful eyes
Highlighted by an enchanting smile
I wonder
If he will get older
I wonder if then
He will stare at people like that
I wonder if when he dies
He will give me that same look
And ask me to pass him
A silver crayon
To color in heavens stars
So they match his eyes
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Post by AshVersion2 on Jul 16, 2006 13:23:01 GMT -5
Still love it!
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Post by skittlestiger on Jul 16, 2006 15:03:37 GMT -5
yay! Thanks ash!!
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Post by scarecrow on Aug 9, 2006 13:28:00 GMT -5
This guy referred me to this site said that this poem alone was reason enough to become a member, and now that I've read it I certainly don't disagree. It's touching without being hokey, and beautiful in its simplicity. Top-notch job.
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Post by Kristin on Aug 9, 2006 13:56:34 GMT -5
Wow, it's beautiful! Very simplistic but very powerful at the same time  |
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Post by scarecrow on Aug 9, 2006 16:16:14 GMT -5
Hey! You copied two of my adjectives and called it a review!
Heinous.
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Post by Emily on Aug 11, 2006 6:01:29 GMT -5
It's lovely! Very simple (sorry scarecrow  ) But alltogether wondeful, and quite simply an awesome poem! Mine are always longwinded and boring ^.^ Hey didn't Eaky used to have a banner and avvie which had your poem on it? |
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Post by scarecrow on Aug 11, 2006 9:29:06 GMT -5
Yeah, she did! She made it because she knew that I liked it so much.
I really miss her.
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Aug 11, 2006 10:19:41 GMT -5
Wow, that's cute and deep, deep in the sense of there's a lot there.
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Post by skittlestiger on Sept 21, 2006 21:41:02 GMT -5
Thanks you guys, it's so nice to be appreciated ^^
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Post by eakyra on Sept 21, 2006 23:35:46 GMT -5
*bubbles* I love this poem. I just love it. And I know scarecrow does. Yeah, I had that banner made because he liked it so much. I wish he would get on. I'll have to put it on here again.  |
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) But alltogether wondeful, and quite simply an awesome poem! 
