Jakazul
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To the ends of the earth.
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Post by Jakazul on Jul 22, 2006 15:00:56 GMT -5
Well, I've been absent for the last week or so due to business and vacation, but I'm back and with a song I've been writing mentally for the last five days, so here it goes! All comments welcome.
Pajama Song
We could wait for the world to stop, As long as we stayed on top... I'm waiting. But waiting without you here.
We could stay for a thousand years. Shielded from all the tears. I'm waiting. I'm waiting without you.
Where have you gone? I miss your head on my shoulder. I miss waking up next to you. I miss not having to grow older.
Your warmth pressed up against me, The cold makes it hard to breathe. I'm waiting. For you to come back home.
It's like the summer surrounded with friends, But summer always ends. I'm waiting. For the seasons to change again.
Where have you gone? I miss your hand clasped in mine. I miss my arm around you. I miss everything being fine.
So are you coming back? Should I wait for another year? My pajama-clad angel, Will you ever again be here?
Copyright Jake Fox 2006, All Rights Reserved
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Post by skittlestiger on Jul 22, 2006 18:11:42 GMT -5
yay, that's awesome!! (mind if I quote you in a sig sometimes??)
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Jakazul
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Post by Jakazul on Jul 23, 2006 14:59:12 GMT -5
Thanks! And I guess so, but I'd really appreciate it if you showed me if you do or put my name on it or something. Basically, I'd just like to see it.
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Sam
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Post by Sam on Apr 21, 2007 1:25:02 GMT -5
Love it, get a rhythm to it, and you might have something
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