Jakazul
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To the ends of the earth.
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Post by Jakazul on Jul 23, 2006 15:02:14 GMT -5
All comments welcome, based on real elements of my life as always. Tell me whatcha think.
Backseat Befuddlement
Make a list of pros and cons, Latter outweighing all. And throw it away. Think about the ins and outs, Wanting to leave it all. And wanting to stay.
When breakup season roles around, Can we be out of town? Or talking about the weather. Wanting to be held at night, And it is weighing down, Or is single better?
Somebody tell me are we holding hands? Or just keeping the balance? Losing shy words, losing our minds, Am I losing a last chance?
The smile keeps pulling in, And the frown pushes out, Is this equillibrium? Compromises must be made, On what we give in about. On what we become.
Parading the secret thoughts gets old, Talking to ourselves again, And going nowhere. Say yes if, no if then, You're never gonna win, If you're not getting somewhere.
Somebody tell me are we holding hands? Or just holding onto possibility? I wish I didn't feel so blind, Everytime I try to see.
Make a list of pros and cons, Latter outweighing all. And throw it away.
Copyright Jake Fox 2006, All Rights Reserved
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Post by skittlestiger on Jul 24, 2006 17:11:18 GMT -5
That's really good, I love all of your writing I've seen so far Jakazulz!
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Jakazul
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To the ends of the earth.
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Post by Jakazul on Jul 25, 2006 19:15:19 GMT -5
Thanks!
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