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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jul 28, 2006 15:40:51 GMT -5
Teh sadness outside is looking at me and
click
of fingernails, perhaps, not keypad–
curséd kaypadd–
spell-check won’t take away his
lines of punctuation as
all combat is punctuation, see,
comma arms and
and-sign epic flourishes
ii-topper eyes of
lava-color
& I’m on the sidelines
----sidelines
saying EXCLAMATION POINT!
I think I love the
(dark/-/side)
and I’m inside this window
saying
1337
leet (oh yes it is a foreign tongue)
A number, speaks thousands--
i’m watching my uncapitalized reflection in the dusky window
sayin’
let go
( that apostraphe is a carefully designed trap)
u (one letter only for your singly multitude of ideas)
u unadamite word-forged weapon–
(Fin)
A/N: Rhythm inspired slightly by "negligible fictional force" of Fictionpress.net
To those who know, this is about Mourn from my novel Plotseekers, and her enemy/old friend. You can rather easily find out who he really is by following my digital tracks, if anyone cares.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2006 15:59:13 GMT -5
damn i like it cy. its unique and well... I dunno... just.... i like it!
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Aug 24, 2006 18:53:34 GMT -5
I liked what i tried with this. i don't know if i like it though...hmm. Any other reviewers? *sad puppy Skywalker eyes*
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Post by AshVersion2 on Aug 25, 2006 10:55:22 GMT -5
It's weird . . . but not in a bad way . . . it's real unique, like Shmuggles said. I like it.
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