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Someday
Sept 15, 2006 23:33:41 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Sept 15, 2006 23:33:41 GMT -5
I just kinda wrote this as a post on my xanga. Nothing special, not ment for anything but amuesment, but I still thought i'd share.
Someday By: Carmen M. Howrey
Someday I'll be the girl. Someday I'll save the world. Someday I'll meet you there. Someday if you dare. Someday I'll see it through. Someday you'll be there too. Someday I will learn. Someday it'll be your turn. Some day you'll know the truth. Someday within the youth. Someday I'll see the light. Someday I'll finish the fight. Someday I'll go beyond. Someday I'll finish the song. Someday they'll understand. Someday right where I am. Someday I'll find the way. Someday seems so far away.
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Someday
Sept 16, 2006 13:50:51 GMT -5
Post by Cy Skywalker on Sept 16, 2006 13:50:51 GMT -5
Aw! You know, some parts of that I like a lot. I loved the beginning and heard it as this fast rockin' song like Alanis Morisette-but there are some lines that seem...immature, or perhaps unbased. "Someday I just wont care." broke the rhythm for me.
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Someday
Sept 17, 2006 0:53:41 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Sept 17, 2006 0:53:41 GMT -5
Awe... thanks! Im editing it now. I see what you mean. It does sound catchy as a song.
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Someday
Sept 19, 2006 14:54:09 GMT -5
Post by Cy Skywalker on Sept 19, 2006 14:54:09 GMT -5
Very nice and much nicer.
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Someday
Sept 19, 2006 23:15:23 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Sept 19, 2006 23:15:23 GMT -5
OOoo danke!
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