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Goodbye
Sept 20, 2006 23:59:23 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Sept 20, 2006 23:59:23 GMT -5
I just kinda felt inspired to write. Nothing much, but here it is anyway.
Goodbye By: Carmen M. Howrey
You were always there Weren't you? Constantly caring the weight of your world, and mine. I wish there was more I could do.
Whenever I needed a friend You held me. Never letting one tear fall far from my face. Now all I can say is, "im sorry."
Because I have to leave now Forever. So be strong and always know I'll be there. And in that way, we'll be together.
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Goodbye
Sept 21, 2006 14:34:43 GMT -5
Post by Cy Skywalker on Sept 21, 2006 14:34:43 GMT -5
Too typical. I mean it's sad, but your words are like you're talking sometimes. Good rhythm. Watch "im" and "caring the weight", which I think is a typo.
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Goodbye
Sept 21, 2006 15:36:58 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Sept 21, 2006 15:36:58 GMT -5
Yeah, it wasnt anything special. I didnt put anything into it. I just kinda wrote it. Bleh. Thanks anyway though. *smile*
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Goodbye
Sept 22, 2006 12:33:11 GMT -5
Post by Cy Skywalker on Sept 22, 2006 12:33:11 GMT -5
How does that work? "Just kinda wrote it"? I don't mean to be nasty--I am interesting in the tecnique, you know? You had the feelings in your head and needed to give them words, or just wanted to write a love poem?
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