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Oct 16, 2006 15:42:38 GMT -5
Post by Emily on Oct 16, 2006 15:42:38 GMT -5
No, I am utterly grateful for doing so, and would much rather have a harsh but helpful review than a 'Zomg! It was the best poem I have ever come across, Em, you're a GENIUS!' review. I'm just confuzzleded by the fallings out. Eh well. I'm staying out of them *backs away from thread*
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Oct 16, 2006 15:44:41 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Oct 16, 2006 15:44:41 GMT -5
Some people just arent meant to get along.
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Brokenhearts
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Oct 16, 2006 15:47:28 GMT -5
Post by Brokenhearts on Oct 16, 2006 15:47:28 GMT -5
thanks Eaky i've been thinkin about it... and im tryin 2 incorporate them in2 it, bt atm, i cnt think of a way 2 do it... i'll update u as soon as i've found away ;D thankies eaky LOL pik- did i ever tell u i luv u? *hugs*
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Oct 16, 2006 15:49:48 GMT -5
Post by Emily on Oct 16, 2006 15:49:48 GMT -5
*is muffled* No....
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Brokenhearts
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Senses
Oct 16, 2006 15:54:11 GMT -5
Post by Brokenhearts on Oct 16, 2006 15:54:11 GMT -5
NOW I HAVE!!!!! *hugs*
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Oct 16, 2006 18:00:43 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Oct 16, 2006 18:00:43 GMT -5
As Eaky said, PLEASE mention in the title of the thread if you don't want me to review it. I will respect your wishes. Otherwise... Well, Fear Me says it all
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Brokenhearts
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Oct 16, 2006 18:22:11 GMT -5
Post by Brokenhearts on Oct 16, 2006 18:22:11 GMT -5
i like reviews, john (see- i'm usin ur name , jst a lil more contructive on how i cud improve wat i've ritten wud b sincerely appriciated. i really am sorry i lashed out at u earlier- ive just had to put up with so much... rubbish about my problems b4 that it's a kinda sore spot now. people here have gotten used to the way i rite now, i hope that u can 2. and i think this will be the last time i rite like this coz i can tell i've spelt most things complitely wrong... truce, john?
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Oct 16, 2006 19:51:32 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Oct 16, 2006 19:51:32 GMT -5
I got the last two words.
I put it up to a vote, Eaky being the deciding voter.
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Oct 16, 2006 20:17:21 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Oct 16, 2006 20:17:21 GMT -5
Deciding voter of what? The truce?
It seems to me that things have cooled down, and both of you atleast partly would like to get along. I dont see any reason why you shouldnt get along, im sure you both could really play off each other. Broky knows about the way she types and has said she will try to do better, but dont pressure her to all at once. This is what her, and all of us are used too so you should considerate a great honor she would up and change just for your happiness and sanity. I think John on your end, you could end up doing something like what you did for me on my Emily poem. When you broke it down for me, that was very helpful and I believe thats what Broky would appreciate aswell.
So please now, shake hands.
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Senses
Oct 16, 2006 21:32:51 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Oct 16, 2006 21:32:51 GMT -5
*tries, but hits the screen*
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Oct 16, 2006 22:37:04 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Oct 16, 2006 22:37:04 GMT -5
*bursts out laughing*
*hugs John*
You really are amazing!
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Oct 17, 2006 17:59:48 GMT -5
Post by Donald Duck on Oct 17, 2006 17:59:48 GMT -5
oh my...what an arguement...
Broky I did like yer poem it was simple which I usually like to read. It could us a few other senses though ;D but since I'm not really a critic I can't really point out any mistakes except it kinda lost its rhythm after "...abandoned me."
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Brokenhearts
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Oct 17, 2006 18:04:40 GMT -5
Post by Brokenhearts on Oct 17, 2006 18:04:40 GMT -5
o yeah… yeah it dus… see- this is y i love critics ;D i shall luk in2 it. and the other senses thing ain't comin on 2 well i shall keep lukin 2 them and improvin the beat after then thankies DD *hugs* and wat i sed about truce- forget it!
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Oct 17, 2006 20:56:33 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Oct 17, 2006 20:56:33 GMT -5
Woa! ... Why the sudden break of the truce? Im so lost. And I feel really sad.
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Oct 17, 2006 21:38:06 GMT -5
Post by Denithar on Oct 17, 2006 21:38:06 GMT -5
Arg. AJ, you're supposed to give the good example to John! I know you can do it! You're too sweet to hold an ugly grudge.
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