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Oct 24, 2006 22:36:55 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Oct 24, 2006 22:36:55 GMT -5
Wow, I know this needs alot of work... and im going to to nitpick it myself. But help would be appreciated. Something I wrote ALONG TIME AGO! Like... 10 years.
Fly. When you get your wings Fly away from here, From the chaos and the anger. Find a place to be free; Fly away for me When you can see the world Fly See the beauty of the earth Beyond the ruggedness of greed Fly away to land or sea Fly away for me When you can change the stars Fly Banished by unused time You'll find a new life Maybe someday you'll be... Fly away for me
Carmen Marie Howrey
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Fly
Nov 2, 2006 21:44:21 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Nov 2, 2006 21:44:21 GMT -5
I think my editing time would be better used on something of higher stature.
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Nov 2, 2006 23:33:02 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Nov 2, 2006 23:33:02 GMT -5
Oky doky.
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SapphireBird
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Nov 9, 2006 20:07:47 GMT -5
Post by SapphireBird on Nov 9, 2006 20:07:47 GMT -5
I think my editing time would be better used on something of higher stature. What is your problem? Who in hell would say that kind of thing?
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Nov 9, 2006 20:49:50 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Nov 9, 2006 20:49:50 GMT -5
Sapphy, dont get upset, thats just John. We already went through a very heated argument over it all, and its finally resolved. John is a very good critic and really a very nice person. You just have to push aside his large ego... ;D
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Nov 11, 2006 18:49:00 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Nov 11, 2006 18:49:00 GMT -5
Most certainly! I am the most pompous person this guild has ever seen. Fortunately, I make up for it with my I.Q., which happens to be magnificent . And a propos, magnificent here means "167, two points higher than genius". And no, it was not a craptastic internet test, it was from Oxford University, at the tender age of six. I think I've shot down any other possible things to criticize about myself.
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Nov 12, 2006 10:06:16 GMT -5
Post by Denithar on Nov 12, 2006 10:06:16 GMT -5
*psst* John, review NinjaPirate's This Way To Fantasy.
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Nov 12, 2006 14:04:45 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Nov 12, 2006 14:04:45 GMT -5
I'll consider it when I have more time.
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Nov 13, 2006 21:28:21 GMT -5
Post by eakyra on Nov 13, 2006 21:28:21 GMT -5
I wish I had more time... and a working computer...
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Nov 14, 2006 10:41:03 GMT -5
Post by johnsapphire on Nov 14, 2006 10:41:03 GMT -5
One of the two still isn't enough.
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