Post by eakyra on Oct 24, 2006 22:41:26 GMT -5
See if you can figure out whats happening. Not my best, but we need new poems. ;D
Underwater Ride
There is water all around.
Sometimes a fish will swim by and
gauk at me from behind the glass.
Mommy rests her eyes for a time.
She lets her crimson hair fall infront of her face.
Funny, I dont remember it being that red.
I hope she wakes up soon.
Then we can go to the ocean and lay on the beach.
We'll build castles and let the sand play between our toes.
I hear a noise echoing through the water.
It sounds like sirens.
I wonder if it might be a whale.
I dont remember how we got on this
underwater ride.
Just mom resting her head on the pillow.
I hope mommy wakes up soon.
The glass is starting to cry.
Carmen Marie Howrey
Underwater Ride
There is water all around.
Sometimes a fish will swim by and
gauk at me from behind the glass.
Mommy rests her eyes for a time.
She lets her crimson hair fall infront of her face.
Funny, I dont remember it being that red.
I hope she wakes up soon.
Then we can go to the ocean and lay on the beach.
We'll build castles and let the sand play between our toes.
I hear a noise echoing through the water.
It sounds like sirens.
I wonder if it might be a whale.
I dont remember how we got on this
underwater ride.
Just mom resting her head on the pillow.
I hope mommy wakes up soon.
The glass is starting to cry.
Carmen Marie Howrey