My First YWG poem ever

[Spinner]

I was skimming through the archives of the old site when I chanced upon this little thing. I found quite amusing at the time and I still do.

John- I know you're just waiting to jump on me on my errors and such but chill for a moment. I did this for fun.

I.M.P.P.
(Insane Man's Pointless Poem)
A bright and beautiful day it was,
When I decided to take a stroll
I needed a walk to refresh my spirit
and to sooth my troubled soul.
I walked trough the park,
hoping to forget my worries.
I walked very slowly,
for I was in ho hurry
After a while I looked upward,
up to the sky so blue
I felt my self rejuvenated,
I felt myself renewed.
At the moment I knew was the time,
to answer the question of the day.
Now I know what to do
There is no time to delay.
The answer was obvious,
My plan shall not fail,
I will pull out a coin from my pocket,
and flip it, head or tails
You might wonder what question
had made me troubled and hot
My trouble was deciding
Should I take a walk or not?

[eakyra]

LOL!

Better critique comming soon.

[johnsapphire]

If that means you don't want a review, I won't waste my time.

[Spinner]

don't get me wrong john....I am glad someone has finally joined the say that doesn't always say.. "great work, good job, etc..." and actually reviews....I'm saying not for this one at least....lol