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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 6, 2006 15:19:16 GMT -5
The Morning Star has burned itself; smothered its land in dull color and torridity. Claustrophobic, this second planet sears; as the sun-rays eeke out their close escapes.
Home. Gentle human hands have stroked the cool grass or flew in swimming through a stream of hydrogen and oxygen. May they arrest the hands on the combusting wheel and cut no more branches from the soaring heights.
For jealous Venus flits along our horizon and bids the Sun send to us its rays that we may bask and utterly forget the heat that, trapped, will feed on Earth’s sky next.
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Post by eakyra on Dec 6, 2006 23:25:26 GMT -5
Very interesting. I love how whimisical your poems always are, but I never seem to fully understand them, you use such large words. ;D I like the last part about jealous Venus. That part I understood and the imagry presented was beautiful. Good job.
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Dec 7, 2006 13:13:10 GMT -5
I utilized a thesaurus with this one. I'd been reading something with really good words, and attempted to get that...though I will never be positive that I have.
Thank you.
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Post by eakyra on Dec 7, 2006 23:28:45 GMT -5
I love thesaurus's. The poem is really unique. As all of your poems are.
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