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Mar 17, 2007 11:59:25 GMT -5
Post by Cy Skywalker on Mar 17, 2007 11:59:25 GMT -5
Standing in their rows like soldiers The books avoid making unscrupulous movements Which might unnnerve the people.
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stickers!
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Mar 18, 2007 15:54:33 GMT -5
Post by stickers! on Mar 18, 2007 15:54:33 GMT -5
I like that a whole lot. Though doesn't unscrupulous mean something like immoral? Does that make sense? I probably just don't get it, you know. You're too dang smart.
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Mar 18, 2007 17:52:34 GMT -5
Post by Ethan on Mar 18, 2007 17:52:34 GMT -5
I agree...I think he should revolt and have Cy banned for being too talented and making us all look bad ...just joking, you are amazing though
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Mar 18, 2007 19:27:17 GMT -5
Post by Cy Skywalker on Mar 18, 2007 19:27:17 GMT -5
I was uncertain about that word, though I thought it fit so nicely. The definition can be either "immoral" or more like "sudden, antagonistic, or abrupt".
(Maybe if other people posted poetry any more I wouldn't look so smart. But I'll not have that argument appear again.)
Thanks, both, for your lovely comments.
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SapphireBird
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Mar 27, 2007 18:12:16 GMT -5
Post by SapphireBird on Mar 27, 2007 18:12:16 GMT -5
It's cute, thoughI was wondering how a book could make a movement, unscrupulous or not. =) This has the potential to be a longer poem though. Why not trying to write more to it?
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