Sam
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Assasinate Ethan by Dawn..
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Post by Sam on Apr 21, 2007 1:20:09 GMT -5
This is something I wrote, it's a speech from my main villain, Morzan.
Alone, again. Alone in my broken palace. Does this darkness resemble my life? The life I cannot escape- no, the life I chose not to escape. I think I realize that now, and maybe that’s why I can’t fight anymore, maybe that is why I don’t want to go on, maybe that’s why I don’t want to leave this tomb, I can see now. I forced myself to believe it was all about her… How many have I killed? How many families have I broken? How many cities have I brought to dust? How many worlds have I conquered before I stop to think, that it wasn’t about her. I belong in the darkness, because in the darkness, I can only know that it is me here, and no one else, but me. Here I lie, burried in the darkness. As always.
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Post by Ethan on Apr 21, 2007 6:21:01 GMT -5
Why post it here? this isnt poetry, Sam...but it is good
EDIT: been thinking about it lately, and it is a good speech...but it doesn't suit the character. Very well written, but I could never see Morzan saying that. It just doesnt suit him, at all
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Sam
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Assasinate Ethan by Dawn..
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Post by Sam on Apr 26, 2007 20:29:03 GMT -5
I could make it a memory of Kara like you suggested, thats always good.
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