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Post by AshVersion2 on Apr 26, 2007 12:45:20 GMT -5
God's Riddler I'm not a mystery I'm always there.
I'm not well known. I'm never seen.
I'm not alive I'm in your soul.
I'm not real. I'm dead to most.
Who am I?
Am I God? Am I a ghost?
Maybe I'm both.
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Post by Angie on May 6, 2007 19:27:46 GMT -5
It's so short and seems so simple, but it's thought-provoking. Nice.
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Post by AshVersion2 on May 8, 2007 10:54:05 GMT -5
Cheers.
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paranoidandroid
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Post by paranoidandroid on May 8, 2007 22:22:42 GMT -5
Very nice, I agree with Angie. My initial instinct was that you should add a couple more lines in there, but then I read it over and decided it's just the right length the way it is. Very nice work. -P.A.
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Post by AshVersion2 on May 9, 2007 10:59:49 GMT -5
Thanks, P.A.
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