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Post by cravenalba on Jun 26, 2007 12:33:17 GMT -5
(She) sang along with the Traffic as it floated Above her head.
Closed her eyes to The sight of a new Morning, and Instead, *breathed* in The world and smiled.
Dug her bare toes Into the {cracks} of The sidewalk, always half- Expecting to hit sand E V E N T U A L L Y.
Walked her line of Life upon a balance- Beam; hop, skip, jump--- And bowed at the finish, Hands outstretched, Clutching springtime’s Blossums.
-C.A.L'Velli 2007
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SapphireBird
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Memento mori-Remember that you are mortal
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Post by SapphireBird on Jun 30, 2007 20:24:25 GMT -5
Awesome, as always.
I love what you did with the parenthesis and such. It was very unique. I also liked the imagery. It's a very cute poem.
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