Oli
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Post by Oli on Aug 9, 2007 16:56:42 GMT -5
This is a song i wrote today about an old mate of mine who died the other week in a car accident.
Full title: I know we lost touch over the years, But you'll still be missed all the same
You'll always be their princess
That will never change,
And though you'll never be there
Your room will stay the same
I wonder if you see these tears
And faces as they fall,
A thousand thoughts all of you
Forever you'll be in our hearts
Now don't you cry, just sit and smile
And let us remember who you are
You'll never change, We'll love you the same
Your mar and par are thinking of you
You'll always be their princess
That will never change,
And though you'll never be there
Your room will stay the same
Your laugh and smile
Your eyes so bright
In our hearts you'll be tonight
We'll always love you
We'll always miss you
One day we know we'll see you again
I wonder if you see these tears
And faces as they fall,
A thousand thoughts all of you
Forever you'll be in our hearts
I know we lost touch over the years
But you'll still be missed all the same
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Aug 9, 2007 17:26:48 GMT -5
im so sorry to hear about ur friend, i dnt pray bt mi thorts and hopes r with u (i no its nt the same, bt its the best consolance i cn offer u). all i cn say is remembr them and ull nvr loose them.
the poem was beatiful, if a little irregular, bt the feeling of loss came thru perfectly. im sure ur friend wud appriciate it.
(god i nvr no wat 2 say...)
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Oli
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Post by Oli on Aug 9, 2007 17:37:06 GMT -5
thanks, you said all you needed to, and means alot.
i just found myself writing this after thinking about it all, and thought i'd share it.
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Aug 9, 2007 18:00:22 GMT -5
personally i feel honered that u wud. its beautiful
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Taurus Tash
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Post by Taurus Tash on Aug 18, 2007 17:10:34 GMT -5
Wow...that was so beautiful!
I'm so sorry about your friend...
What ever happened, it must have had a huge effect on the people that loved her...including you.
That was lovely!
!TASH!
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Oli
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Post by Oli on Aug 21, 2007 5:44:33 GMT -5
wow, thanks.
that really does mean alot to hear that!
thank you.
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Taurus Tash
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Post by Taurus Tash on Aug 21, 2007 13:01:47 GMT -5
You're welcome! Anytime! ^-^
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Sam
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Post by Sam on Sept 4, 2007 19:05:15 GMT -5
That was a beautiful Song Oil, it really was. I can tell it came from the heart. I know that's a cheesy thing to say, but I really do think it came from the heart.
Those lyrics are what I think, when I recall the ones I've lost. You're full of heart there.
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