Post by Erik on Oct 24, 2006 10:02:18 GMT -5
Briefly, this is a story (well a narrative at any rate) written for my English teacher to be submitted as coursework at the end of this academic year. All reviews would be appreciated - both constructive, and well not so. ;D
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It was unseasonably chilly for the time of year. The moist air was damp and thick, clinging to the urban streets uneasily. Far below the skyscrapers, once handsome flowers blew softly in the wind, their forms now withered and shrunken - dying. Rigid trees creaked anxiously in the breeze and dogs howled nervously from the distant suburbs. As the people far below carried on oblivious, a feeling of restlessness and anger was creeping over the still bustling city; engulfing the skyline. Striding along Bishopsgate, their mundane lives carrying on as usual, they did not notice the unnatural stiffness that gripped the metropolis. If they had only stood and stopped they would have felt it; Mother Nature was troubled.
‘It should be hotter than this’ Marcus thought as he swiftly paced the pavement, dust billowing around his immaculate Armani trousers. Feet clad in soft leather, his steps were purposeful yet gentle - grey, calculating eyes locked in front of him – his steely gaze resolute, unwavering. Daring glints of light pierced through the overcast sky and shone down upon his slender form, the radiance of their beams warming him, only to be brusquely obscured by passing cloud cover, veiling a magnificent azure heaven. It was almost as if it was forbidden to taint the bleak firmament that had shrouded the district.
Quickening his pace, Marcus sharply turned the corner and manoeuvred himself around the swarm of suited replicas typically assembled on the thoroughfare. Approaching the entrance, the doors to the complex swung open in front of him and smartly he made his way towards the lift.
‘Good morning Mr. Townsford’ the young woman behind the desk beamed, flashing him a dazzling, white smile. Nodding in return, Marcus carried on his path, satisfied. He didn’t know the girl, of course, but it was pleasant of her to greet him nonetheless. Then again, as she had no doubt heard, flattery will get you anywhere in the insincere society of today. In all likelihood she was after a pay rise, thought the tycoon shrewdly, but who could blame her, chances as rare as they had become now? Marcus had done the same thing in his youth and whilst ironically and rather hypocritically he frowned on it now, he couldn’t help but feel a slight admiration for her nerve. He might have to think about increasing her salary, after all he noted to himself. Providing she didn’t do it too often, naturally.
Entering the elevator the director examined himself in the mirror, brushing a single silver strand from his face as he leisurely began his ascent. A striking mane, his silver hair was an impressive sight, reminiscent of a lion, and he had the nobility of the great beast to match. Well-groomed and dapper he was the antithesis of many of his junior executives, having his suits tailor made at an old premises on Saville Row. Yet as his encounter just moments ago had reminded him, he was getting old and he knew it. He no longer commanded the respect he once did; the people who once would have taken his testaments as gospel now consciously dismissed his views, satisfying him only to maintain a firm grasp on their jobs. Even common courtesies such as smiling were dispensed with when deemed not necessary. There was no escape from it. His power and youth had dwindled. Everyday there was another wrinkle. His wife could call it a laughter line until she was blue in the face, but no - he was starting to show his age. Efficiency personified, he was at the top of his game, but he just wasn’t quite as sharp as he used to be.
The lift shuddered to a halt, and Marcus Townsford glided out, composed and ready. As he had done for twenty years, he entered his office, poured himself a large scotch and sat gently at his maple desk reading the daily newspaper his secretary had placed ready for him.
Julia had been the secretary of the company director for the last fifteen years. Competent and intelligent she could read Marcus like a book. She knew for example that he was stringent about routine and she knew that he did not like to be disturbed early in the morning
This is why it came as rather a shock to Marcus to find that Julia broke both of those rules that morning.
‘Sorry to disturb you Marcus but it’s Robert on the line. He says he needs to talk to you’
‘Surely it can wait’ replied the disgruntled businessman.
‘No, I don’t think so- he says it urgent.’
‘Right tell I’ll be there in five’ groaned a weary Mr. Townsford
Putting the phone down Marcus thought of what Robert could want. Having worked with the man for years he had come to know him well and knew he wouldn’t have disturbed him had it not been important. If the truth were told Robert had grown to be more or less a partner.
Closing the door to the conference room behind him Marcus was somewhat startled to see before him, assembled, his entire board of directors. Sitting solemnly there they looked gravely at him, before Robert stood and came toward him.
‘We didn’t have a meeting this morning, did we? ’ asked Marcus Townsford, normally the most perceptive of people. Suddenly he noticed the expressions which still lingered on the faces of his staff who had quickly tried to disguise their apprehension. ‘What’s the problem?’ he enquired- his voice laced with concern.
‘Marcus’ started Robert ‘our profits are below all the projectiles. We can’t cover our expenses- we’re losing money. Now it’s been like this for months but it’s more serious now-the shares are going down. We’ve laid off all the people we can. It can’t go any further. The public are losing respect for the firm. Now we could try a new strategy perhaps, buy cheaper materials but it won’t save us. We need to get out. We’ve all talked and we think you should liquidate the company. I know it means a lot to you but…’
There was more but Marcus didn’t hear. He had expected it some day perhaps but not then and not from Robert. If there was one person who he had thought was unlike the others, one person who he thought he could be honest with, it was Robert. Yet he was wrong. This man was no different from any of the others, not from the clones on the street outside, nor to the other men in this suite. It was a forged relationship, a fabrication, and it sickened Marcus to the bone. He gazed around at the now fretful faces of the men seated at his desk, and saw the apprehension in their deflated bodies. Well he knew what they wanted, but he wasn’t going to make it quite that easy for them. Tentatively a smirk crept across the old executives face and his gaze, cool, settled on Robert.
‘So?’ asked Robert hesitantly ‘Will you?’
‘No’ replied Townsford flatly.
‘What! Didn’t you listen to a word I just said?’
Laughing, making no effort to disguise his glee, Marcus Townsford interrupted ‘I listened to every word you said but my answer is no’
‘But the company will go under’ retorted the executive
‘Maybe it will but I’ll take that chance. And I think I’ll take it without you as well, if you don’t mind. ’ replied his boss smugly.
‘You’re a foolish old cretin’ hollered Robert Pinner whilst he stormed out of the room and Marcus’ company for ever, his nine allies in hot pursuit.
‘Perhaps I am’ muttered Marcus to himself but I’ll be a blissful one.
The next day was warm and sunny. During the night a storm had passed and the air was fresh and clear. Everything was back to normal. Well close to normal at any rate. Marcus, for one, hadn’t felt so rejuvenated in years. He felt young again. Free from the jurisdiction of those who had been his executive committee, he was finally back where he belonged. At last Mother Nature, and indeed Marcus, was at peace.
~
It was unseasonably chilly for the time of year. The moist air was damp and thick, clinging to the urban streets uneasily. Far below the skyscrapers, once handsome flowers blew softly in the wind, their forms now withered and shrunken - dying. Rigid trees creaked anxiously in the breeze and dogs howled nervously from the distant suburbs. As the people far below carried on oblivious, a feeling of restlessness and anger was creeping over the still bustling city; engulfing the skyline. Striding along Bishopsgate, their mundane lives carrying on as usual, they did not notice the unnatural stiffness that gripped the metropolis. If they had only stood and stopped they would have felt it; Mother Nature was troubled.
‘It should be hotter than this’ Marcus thought as he swiftly paced the pavement, dust billowing around his immaculate Armani trousers. Feet clad in soft leather, his steps were purposeful yet gentle - grey, calculating eyes locked in front of him – his steely gaze resolute, unwavering. Daring glints of light pierced through the overcast sky and shone down upon his slender form, the radiance of their beams warming him, only to be brusquely obscured by passing cloud cover, veiling a magnificent azure heaven. It was almost as if it was forbidden to taint the bleak firmament that had shrouded the district.
Quickening his pace, Marcus sharply turned the corner and manoeuvred himself around the swarm of suited replicas typically assembled on the thoroughfare. Approaching the entrance, the doors to the complex swung open in front of him and smartly he made his way towards the lift.
‘Good morning Mr. Townsford’ the young woman behind the desk beamed, flashing him a dazzling, white smile. Nodding in return, Marcus carried on his path, satisfied. He didn’t know the girl, of course, but it was pleasant of her to greet him nonetheless. Then again, as she had no doubt heard, flattery will get you anywhere in the insincere society of today. In all likelihood she was after a pay rise, thought the tycoon shrewdly, but who could blame her, chances as rare as they had become now? Marcus had done the same thing in his youth and whilst ironically and rather hypocritically he frowned on it now, he couldn’t help but feel a slight admiration for her nerve. He might have to think about increasing her salary, after all he noted to himself. Providing she didn’t do it too often, naturally.
Entering the elevator the director examined himself in the mirror, brushing a single silver strand from his face as he leisurely began his ascent. A striking mane, his silver hair was an impressive sight, reminiscent of a lion, and he had the nobility of the great beast to match. Well-groomed and dapper he was the antithesis of many of his junior executives, having his suits tailor made at an old premises on Saville Row. Yet as his encounter just moments ago had reminded him, he was getting old and he knew it. He no longer commanded the respect he once did; the people who once would have taken his testaments as gospel now consciously dismissed his views, satisfying him only to maintain a firm grasp on their jobs. Even common courtesies such as smiling were dispensed with when deemed not necessary. There was no escape from it. His power and youth had dwindled. Everyday there was another wrinkle. His wife could call it a laughter line until she was blue in the face, but no - he was starting to show his age. Efficiency personified, he was at the top of his game, but he just wasn’t quite as sharp as he used to be.
The lift shuddered to a halt, and Marcus Townsford glided out, composed and ready. As he had done for twenty years, he entered his office, poured himself a large scotch and sat gently at his maple desk reading the daily newspaper his secretary had placed ready for him.
Julia had been the secretary of the company director for the last fifteen years. Competent and intelligent she could read Marcus like a book. She knew for example that he was stringent about routine and she knew that he did not like to be disturbed early in the morning
This is why it came as rather a shock to Marcus to find that Julia broke both of those rules that morning.
‘Sorry to disturb you Marcus but it’s Robert on the line. He says he needs to talk to you’
‘Surely it can wait’ replied the disgruntled businessman.
‘No, I don’t think so- he says it urgent.’
‘Right tell I’ll be there in five’ groaned a weary Mr. Townsford
Putting the phone down Marcus thought of what Robert could want. Having worked with the man for years he had come to know him well and knew he wouldn’t have disturbed him had it not been important. If the truth were told Robert had grown to be more or less a partner.
Closing the door to the conference room behind him Marcus was somewhat startled to see before him, assembled, his entire board of directors. Sitting solemnly there they looked gravely at him, before Robert stood and came toward him.
‘We didn’t have a meeting this morning, did we? ’ asked Marcus Townsford, normally the most perceptive of people. Suddenly he noticed the expressions which still lingered on the faces of his staff who had quickly tried to disguise their apprehension. ‘What’s the problem?’ he enquired- his voice laced with concern.
‘Marcus’ started Robert ‘our profits are below all the projectiles. We can’t cover our expenses- we’re losing money. Now it’s been like this for months but it’s more serious now-the shares are going down. We’ve laid off all the people we can. It can’t go any further. The public are losing respect for the firm. Now we could try a new strategy perhaps, buy cheaper materials but it won’t save us. We need to get out. We’ve all talked and we think you should liquidate the company. I know it means a lot to you but…’
There was more but Marcus didn’t hear. He had expected it some day perhaps but not then and not from Robert. If there was one person who he had thought was unlike the others, one person who he thought he could be honest with, it was Robert. Yet he was wrong. This man was no different from any of the others, not from the clones on the street outside, nor to the other men in this suite. It was a forged relationship, a fabrication, and it sickened Marcus to the bone. He gazed around at the now fretful faces of the men seated at his desk, and saw the apprehension in their deflated bodies. Well he knew what they wanted, but he wasn’t going to make it quite that easy for them. Tentatively a smirk crept across the old executives face and his gaze, cool, settled on Robert.
‘So?’ asked Robert hesitantly ‘Will you?’
‘No’ replied Townsford flatly.
‘What! Didn’t you listen to a word I just said?’
Laughing, making no effort to disguise his glee, Marcus Townsford interrupted ‘I listened to every word you said but my answer is no’
‘But the company will go under’ retorted the executive
‘Maybe it will but I’ll take that chance. And I think I’ll take it without you as well, if you don’t mind. ’ replied his boss smugly.
‘You’re a foolish old cretin’ hollered Robert Pinner whilst he stormed out of the room and Marcus’ company for ever, his nine allies in hot pursuit.
‘Perhaps I am’ muttered Marcus to himself but I’ll be a blissful one.
The next day was warm and sunny. During the night a storm had passed and the air was fresh and clear. Everything was back to normal. Well close to normal at any rate. Marcus, for one, hadn’t felt so rejuvenated in years. He felt young again. Free from the jurisdiction of those who had been his executive committee, he was finally back where he belonged. At last Mother Nature, and indeed Marcus, was at peace.