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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 12, 2007 12:28:08 GMT -5
Dennis Daemen uploaded the evacuation of Earth on to his YouTube name. Probably, other people elsewhere on the boxy white ships were doing the same thing. Den spared no attention for them. His focus knew only his radiophone held before his eyes and twice, once on the six-inch LED screen and once on the seven-inch porthole-window, he saw the blue-green-white planet getting smaller. The curtain of stars panned out. The yellow Sun crescented into view at the lower right corner, more huge than the reflection of Den’s face on the screen (which veiled the Earth). Not its fault that the icecaps liquified and the snow went extinct. Our fault. Earth: too hot. So thought Den as he named his video ‘Earth from Bushidokai’. There would be much drinking and carousing in zero gravity as the journey began. Den’s family, mother and father and stepfather, were right now somewhere getting ready. Den knew that they missed Earth also.. That would be why they caroused. That, though, was why he stood here with the double, teenagers’ and artist’s, pleasure of being alone with his screens. He searched ‘Earth’ on YouTube to see if anyone’s video was liable to get better comments than his.
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jan 15, 2007 18:08:53 GMT -5
4 words: is there any more?!?!?!?!
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Post by Cy Skywalker on Jan 16, 2007 15:22:55 GMT -5
Heh, nope. I realized that this one needs some fixing, in terms of plausibility--and typos. You liked it, though? Cool. You may see more like this in the future.
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Jan 16, 2007 18:23:33 GMT -5
throughly enjoyed it!!!! using youtube brought it closer to home, and the fact that they're moving away frm earth nevr 2 return is emotional, but also reassuring (not THAT close in the future). YAY!!!!! i luk 4ward 2 tht!!!!! and typos r easily lukd ovr evry1 makes mistakes.
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