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Post by Chris on Aug 18, 2007 18:49:41 GMT -5
Now this story I'm in love with. It has so much potential, and that tone is marvellous: you seem to choose exactly the right words to make it wonderfully moody, and not in a boring way, and your main character really has some depth. Top notch job! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Taurus Tash
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Post by Taurus Tash on Aug 18, 2007 18:53:58 GMT -5
Cool! I'll post it now! Thx for the review! ^-^
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Sam
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Post by Sam on Sept 19, 2007 17:26:00 GMT -5
Of course I gotta agree; it's such a moody and cute story. I love the contraversey between characters, and your descriptions. Try to make characters more notified and deeper though, although who knows, maybe they will
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Taurus Tash
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~Do you like waffles? Yeah we like waffles!~
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Post by Taurus Tash on Oct 7, 2007 13:43:57 GMT -5
Thanks! You find something out about Gwen too, but I will never tell what it is! *evil grin*
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