Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Dec 3, 2006 12:00:56 GMT -5
All I have at the moment are a bunch of old pictures...I haven't draw in quite a while. So this is my disclaimer; if they suck, it was cuz I was young and innocent and yeah XD A warrior monk drawn in the style of Fusion, which is an America Comic Book style with a Manga influence. Things wrong with it: --anatomy's totally messed up. This is one limber dude! Unfinished pic of a blade dancer, drawn from a human model. --Hair needs to be swooshing the other way. --gotta finish the darn thing. Inked Sorceress, drawn purely frojm my mind. --waaaaay too bony in the clavicle area. --Needs a face. That mask don't cut it. Thanks ahead of time for checking it out!
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Post by AshVersion2 on Dec 3, 2006 12:03:07 GMT -5
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dude, these are so good!
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Brokenhearts
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Post by Brokenhearts on Dec 3, 2006 12:45:29 GMT -5
*tries 2 find somethin rong* *fails…*
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Post by Donald Duck on Dec 5, 2006 19:04:55 GMT -5
These are wonderful. ;D
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Post by eakyra on Dec 5, 2006 22:04:53 GMT -5
I love how well you do shading, and your detail with the clothing is exquisite. Wonderful.
The Monk, his chest really stands out to me, the right peck looks way off. And his left upper arm looks to muscled. I love the detail on his head, and the look on his face that gives that PO'ed look in such a calm way.
The first thing that caught my attention with the blade dancer was her legs, they look to big for the rest of her body. And I agree, hair does need to be swooshing other way. I really love the clothing, I've always wanted to draw simular outfit and it never comes out right for me. Wonderful job. And good job on not making her to boney. ;D
The last one totally wow'ed me. Your definatly right about the collar bone area, she looks WAY to boney right there, but the rest of her is near perfect. I dont really like how her boots flare up at the top, seems to round. But thats just me. I dont know why you dont like the mask, it gives such an allure to the picture, such mystery, you wonder weather she is good or evil. You cant really tell.
Excellent work. :bows:
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Post by Emily on Dec 6, 2006 0:41:40 GMT -5
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dude, these are so good! LOLOLOL ASH! What she said - I love your inked work. Well I love all of it. *whips out some cutlery, table and a chair* WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! *chants while banging spoons on the table* Ahem. I don't think we've met ;D Pleased to meet you! (I'm Em)
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Dec 6, 2006 2:03:53 GMT -5
Actually, Eaky, the Blade Dancer was drawn from a live model, with proportions matching those drawn...so any enlargement is due to the model, not me Thanks for the kind words everyone!
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Post by Donald Duck on Dec 6, 2006 19:00:09 GMT -5
I have to ask what kind of pens did you use on the last picture?
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Dec 6, 2006 21:47:27 GMT -5
A single pen, actually--it has interchangable tips ranging from 01 to 09 in terms of width.
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Post by eakyra on Dec 6, 2006 23:30:25 GMT -5
Actually, Eaky, the Blade Dancer was drawn from a live model, with proportions matching those drawn...so any enlargement is due to the model, not me Thanks for the kind words everyone! Well sorry for trying to give you a serious critique. I will just use mindless garble to tell you how well you draw from now on.
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Hunter
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Post by Hunter on Dec 8, 2006 21:55:52 GMT -5
Oh please don't misunderstand that...I really appreciate serous critiques and especially suggestions about my work. ...I just like the opportunity to justify my choices when I draw as well... Don't hate me?
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Post by eakyra on Dec 8, 2006 23:26:52 GMT -5
Oh pfft... I dont hate anyone. Ever.
*hugs*
And I understand. I suppose it was just one of those nights...
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