Brokenhearts
Rank 15 (On Angie's Level)
Beware, all ye who talk 2 me
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Post by Brokenhearts on Nov 23, 2007 11:56:28 GMT -5
i dnt know what to call it coz if i call it 'black and white' it would appear to be a race poem... bt anyway: my FINAL piece =]
The world presented is In black and in white With angels of purity With devils of night
White is of the angels With silver and gold Their emblem is purity Their legends are old
Black is of the devils In the depths of hell Fire burns their charcol skin As sin is what they sell
For years these plain Images have been fed To the population With doubts unsaid
No one dares questions The piety of angels No body dares deny The evil of devils
And yet it is seen With our own eyes That our world is not so simple That these could all be lies
Is it not possible that The angels presented Are not all they seem And could be resented
Could it not be that Those devils are mistreated They could possess hearts And their virtues been depleated
How can it be that in A world so colourful and bright So many have been blinded And only see the black and the white
Is it quite possible For such beings to be Quite so narrow minded When there is so much to see
Heed this you angels and And listen you devils; far to long You have been the Symbols of lies too strong
Far too long you have Shown a world too plain Too simple, too clean ,too cut Where those who think go insane
And so to you I put foreward this plea For all those to listen For all those to see
Please do not be so blind my friends See through that eternal Veil Please decide your own black and white my friends As this is what life will entail
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Post by cutieilydylan on Sept 16, 2008 21:14:42 GMT -5
amazing, love the way u expressed the word, the genre u chose is very interesting, beautiful piece of writing
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